#3 (due Friday, April 1st): revision comments

1. Revise your stories, based on all peer feedback.  Finals due in class next time.
2. Blog #3: like before, post a piece of feedback that your partner gave you, either praise or criticism about the setting, and explain how it helped you to revise your piece.

One piece of critism that was very helpful was the just entering commas into my piece to make it less confusing. Entering the commas made it a lot easier to read and to follow for the reader. I am glad that no one thought that the narriration was confusing because that was something I struggled with.

#2 (due Friday, March 18): comments on revisions

Post at least one piece of praise or constructive criticism you received on your stories, and explain how it was helpful to you, in revising the story.

One piece of constructive criticism was to make my plot more clear by showing the character in different environments. To improve my plot development I showed the character in school vs. the character at home to show how different she was in both places. This allows the reader to see how fake she is without the narrorator really saying anything. This piece of critism was very helpful because it made my story a lot clearer and easier to follow.